Correction suggestions for USB Li-Ion/Li-Poly Charger v 1.2

WBA Consulting

USB Li-Ion/Li-Poly Charger v 1.2

Corrections suggested:

1. Second sentence, first paragraph, missing a Y on battery: "...Lithium Polymer batter ..."
2. Third sentence, first paragraph, missing a comma: "Just know that if you're doing both, the battery will charge slower."
3. First feature bullet point, missing an R on your: "...for wiring in you favorite project board"
4. Fourth feature bullet point, should state DC IN not just DC and singular for the "status LED": "...for the battery, DC, and status LEDs"
5. Fifth feature bullet point, should be upper case L: "For use with lithium Ion"
6. Sixth feature bullet point is duplicate of second feature bullet point
7. Seventh feature bullet point, remove redundancy usage of "in" to add clarity: "... and solder in the thermistor in it's place." should be "... and solder the thermistor in it's place."
8. Recommend adding the USB cable as a related item.

thanks!

EmilyKurze

WBA Consulting wrote: »

USB Li-Ion/Li-Poly Charger v 1.2

Corrections suggested:

1. Second sentence, first paragraph, missing a Y on battery: "...Lithium Polymer batter ..."
2. Third sentence, first paragraph, missing a comma: "Just know that if you're doing both, the battery will charge slower."
3. First feature bullet point, missing an R on your: "...for wiring in you favorite project board"
4. Fourth feature bullet point, should state DC IN not just DC and singular for the "status LED": "...for the battery, DC, and status LEDs"
5. Fifth feature bullet point, should be upper case L: "For use with lithium Ion"
6. Sixth feature bullet point is duplicate of second feature bullet point
7. Seventh feature bullet point, remove redundancy usage of "in" to add clarity: "... and solder in the thermistor in it's place." should be "... and solder the thermistor in it's place."
8. Recommend adding the USB cable as a related item.

thanks!

Thank you! I have made these corrections.