Tutorial for review please!

I'm working on an introductory tutorial designed to move very quickly into basic spin programming with some simple LED demos. I'd really appreciate some feedback on this.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7557533/temp/Propeller%20Programming%20First%20Steps.pdf
Thanks gang.
OBC
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7557533/temp/Propeller%20Programming%20First%20Steps.pdf
Thanks gang.
OBC
Comments
Should probably be
Only 7 bits are being set, so the constant only needs to be seven ones. Of course, eight ones would work also. The word "through" is better than the abbreviated term "thru" for people where English is not their first language.
Also, the range 16..22 is bit-reversed from the normal bit ordering. It may be less confusing to use 22..16, but either form is OK.
Dave
Actually, the demo will be increased to 8bits. I seem to have misplaced one when I was transcribing the text from a different board I was using here.
Thanks!
OBC